Subordination Worksheet 1 Key

  Note:  The revised sentences below are not the only correct answers.
 

1.  The Hudson River originates in the Adirondacks.
     It empties into the Atlantic Ocean.
     It is named for Henry Hudson.
     He was an English explorer.

     The Hudson River, named for the English explorer Henry Hudson, originates in the Adirondacks.

2.  Phillis Wheatley was an eighteenth-century American poet.
     She grew up as a slave in Boston.
     Her book of poetry was first published in England.
     

     Phillis Wheatley, who grew up as a slave in Boston, was an eighteenth-century American  poet whose poetry was first 
     published in England.
 


3.  Our tour bus stopped at Loch Ness.
     It is a lake in Scotland.
     It is more than twenty miles long.
     A legendary monster makes its home there.

     Our tour bus stopped at Loch Ness, which is a lake in Scotland that is more than twenty miles long and is where a
     legendary monster makes its home.    

4.  The Greater Snow Goose is white with black-tipped wings.
     It breeds in the Arctic.
     It migrates in winter to the coast of the Middle Atlantic states.

     The Greater Snow Goose, which is white with black-tipped wings, breeds in the Arctic and migrates in the winter to the
     coast of the Middle Atlantic states.

5.  H. L. Mencken was a journalist.
     He wrote a book entitled The American Language.
     It was first published in 1919.
     It reflects his interest in American English.

     H. L. Mencken was a journalist who wrote a book entitled The American Language, which was first published in 1919 and
     reflects his interest in American English.

6.  Children enjoy Halloween.
     It is celebrated on the night of October 31.
     It evolved from ancient fall festivals.
     The Irish and Scots brought it to this country.

     Children enjoy Halloween, celebrated on the night of October 31, which evolved from ancient fall festivals and was
     brought to this country by the Irish and Scots.

7.  Nicolaus Copernicus was an astronomer.
     He was born in Poland on February 19, 1473.
     He perceived that the earth revolves around the sun.
     Thus the earth is not the center of the universe.

     Nicolaus Copernicus, born in Poland on February 19, 1473, was an astronomer who perceived that the earth revolves
     around the sun; thus, the earth is not the center of the universe.

8.  Runes are symbols of an ancient alphabet.
     They were brought to England by Germanic tribes.
     Some persons thought that they had magical powers.
     They were replaced by the letters of the Roman alphabet.

     Runes, which are symbols of an ancient alphabet and which some people thought had magical  powers, were brought to
     England by Germanic tribes and were replaced by the letters of the Roman alphabet.

9.  Dante Gabriel Rossetti was an English painter.
     He married Elizabeth Biddal.
     She was his model as well as his wife.
     His father was a political exile from Italy.

     Dante Gabriel Rossetti, an English painter whose father was a political exile from Italy, married Elizabeth Biddal, who was
     his model as well as his wife.

10.  Last summer we went to the mountains of North Carolina.
      We visited a restored Indian village.
      The Indians were Cherokee.
      The name of the village is Oconaluftee.

       Last summer we went to the mountains of North Carolina and visited a restored Cherokee Indian village named
       Ocanaluftee.

11.  The Norse gods and goddesses were not eternally young.
       They preserved their youth by eating magical apples.
       The goddess Idun kept these apples.
       She was the goddess of spring and youth.

       The Norse gods and goddesses, who were not eternally young, preserved their youth by eating magical apples kept by
       Idun, the goddess of spring and youth.

12.  Juan Pablos was an Italian printer.
       He lived in Spain.
       He migrated to Mexico in 1539.
       He was probably the first printer in the Americas.
       I read this in The Book by Douglas McMurtie.

        I read in Douglas McMurtie’s The Book that Juan Pablos, an Italian printer who lived in Spain and migrated to Mexico in
       1539, was probably the first printer in the Americas.

13.  The couple set out for Fairbanks on the Alcan Highway.
       They had two dogs.
       The dogs’ names were Homer and Horace.
       The couple sent the two dogs by air to their new station.

The couple set out for Fairbanks on the Alcan Highway, while they sent their two dogs, Homer and Horace, by air to their new station.

14.  The Gulf Stream is an ocean current.
       It originates in the Gulf of Mexico.
       It flows along the east coast of the United States.
       Near Nantucket it turns out into North America.

The Gulf Stream is an ocean current that originates in the Gulf of Mexico and flows along the east coast of the United States before it turns out into the North Atlantic near Nantucket.

15.  David was a shepherd boy from Israel.
       He played the lyre.
       His music comforted King Saul.
       King Saul suffered from dark moods.

David, who played the lyre, was a shepherd boy from Israel whose music comforted King Saul, who suffered from dark moods.  

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